#HHH
You need to rap about something "real". This exaggerated lifestyle you put into your music/lyrics is destroying your own image. I noticed.. the more fans lost, the more alts gained on your part. Time to stop focusing on others & start focusing on yourself.. Be true to yourself & alot of doors will open up. It's time for a change and a wake up to reality.
#Criticism:
The lyrics & rhyming are quite simple...
EX:
Dead - Bed
Larger - Harder
(The rhymes you use is rhymes I'll use in a freestyle)
Also your lyrics did not match the feel of the beat and felt almost irrelevant to what the original producer of the song was aiming for.
Tighten up
-RMP