from 0:00 to 0:06, with that crash/hit whatever it's called... my n***a you got the potential to do ALOT with that sound.. the direction you went with this song kinda disappointed me. You should go back to the lab, start over, work with the intro and build off of that. Who know's what you'll discover? ;)
0:52 sounded pretty tight too. It got potential, I just say this needs a lil more looking into
that's all
-RMP