Yo.. you stepped up.
yo, this is really tight on some real sh*t. Maybe we can do a couple rap tracks together.. I'll holla@chu if anything.
-RMP
+RESPECT+
Yo.. you stepped up.
yo, this is really tight on some real sh*t. Maybe we can do a couple rap tracks together.. I'll holla@chu if anything.
-RMP
+RESPECT+
Appreciate the review. I try to improve everytime I drop a track. Keep it up yaself.
Peace
You sound stressed out
All I can say is stick to "comedy-rap", because when you try to rap serious.. it's comes out wack. Keep my name out yo mouth, and maybe ..I'll start determining who's the better one in this battle.
EXTRA!! EXTRA!! THE AMAZING WORLD OF WARCRAFT BATTLE!!!
Internet White Blood vs Internet British Blood.
Who will win?? lmfao
-RMP
LMFAO your all pissed off because we use your weak ass as a ragdoll weapon to attack eachother. shows how pathethic you are. go look at your picture some more on my news. lmfao computer thug D=
lol angry zero bomber in the building haahha
Wow
I dunno why but in your music, I determine you must be a very "angry child". I dunno.. why.. I just feel some strong vibe.. some very mean vibe coming from your songs. It's some-what cool. Your steppin' up though. keep it up.
(I see you using luis vocals ova there haha xD cool)
-RMP
lmfao
That line is still bananas. You should get drunk more often.. But god damn you was trippin' hard when we was talking.. lmao, you was spitting these same lines.. N no matter how many times I listen to them lines.. they sound fire each time.
And who ever made that beat isn't even bananas.. they the whole fucking sundae. Haha!! But yo, I'm making a mixtape "Godfathers Of Fire". And I don't even gotta ask.. you know what the business is. Holla, and keep that shit up
-RMP
+RESPECT+
"YO KILLIN' MEH!!" 3:49 lol
No offense.. but rapping is just not for you, Your flow is completely off. Your lyrical skills are the talents of an E.S.O.L. 3rd grader. You try to throw in punchlines.. but I just wasn't feeling them. The beat is definitely not your style, you have no flow.. so why are you going to hop on a beat that requires flow? But I'd say you seriously should stop rapping, because it's not in you to rap. Your not even considered a rapper. And anyone who gives this a 10, is obviously dick riding.. Because if this was actually a 10/10 work, everything you did in this song would be perfect.. and you wouldn't even need criticism. But that's the thing.. people feel sorry for you because you have no flow. But in reality.. people aren't like that.. Record companies will never look for "poets" like you. Never! I'd rather listen to Soulja boy than listen to the first 30 seconds of your song.
This song doesn't deserve anything higher than a 4, on some real talk.
Anyways, I already know this message is going to be deleted cuz of the fact that your going to report me for dropping it.. but heh.. I don't care as long as I got my point across.
-RMP
+NO RESPECT+
Your embarrassing yourself.
Glad you liked it=D and thanks for the support
Your a lil bit better than yoink.
Don't say n***a.. EVER in your life. Your a wanna-b don't forget dat. You have no right to use that word.
Your rap is w/e. It ain't too bad.. but your never gonna be anything more than a NG rapper.
And stop dissing man.. disses ain't always jokes.. it's on some serious tip.
-RMP
OH NOES, MY CARRER AS A RAPPER IS IN PERIL....
jesus crist i had a feeling you drop a song
all my songs (got 0 bombed) went down at once as well.
Lmao, look at these thieves not only are you guy's nerds/posers/and E-Thugs.
You also got somebody trying to rap like WAR-SPAWN. lmao ravil u nerdy bastard.. u n lejin need to go tag team in world of warcraft somewhere.
Dis song sucks, here's a 10 and a 5/5 though. (to keep you from reporting me)
-RMP (laughing at the wack ass attempts)
thanks for the zero you backwards idiot XD you failed in all your attempts. with your kindergarden rap LMFAO go take over mercury in the ass again hahahaha fucking dick rida you crack me up faggot boy. Pay your phone bill you fucking wet tree afro looking dumb fuck LMFAOOOOOOO!!!
e0-thug give me a fucking break look in the mirro you weak little internet piece of shit. XD
Yo..
you fucking already know wut dis iz rit here.. dis iz a CLUB BANGER!!!
Caliber!! Non of these Cats on NG can drop hit's like this.. Keep 'em comin' REAL TALK.
-RMP
+RESPECT+
Hm...
You got some potential to become a good producer.. Try not to add too many random things at the ending. I liked da beginning when you had it plain and simple. Keep practicing you'll get better, check out meh music if you ever need motivation.
~1~
-RMP
Da bleek is back--
You already know dat dis beat is tight work. I like da bass alot. You need ta make a rap song on dis shit. On some real
-RMP
+RESPECT+
Recording Artist/Electronic Music Producer/Sound Engineer reporting for duty! Holla@me 4 Collabs & Features, TheEyeOFMusiK@gmail.com
Age 32, Male
Producer/Rapper
Miami, Florida
Joined on 7/3/07