hmm.
I like the outcome of this song. I like how everything slowly comes in.. but your lil "chopped brass instrument" in dat melody you got a wrong note in there.. and having wrong notes in your song can make you look bad. I like the bass + Oh hat mixture, it comes out hard. I say more could be done to this. Here's a lil secret for yeah.. Did you know that "Aye!" sound you used in this song?? Did you know if you were to make it big.. the creator of that sound will sue you?? Just lettin' you know. If your gonna make any vocals.. make sure you make it or someone you trust made it.. not over the internet though.. you may know various people on this "net" but 85% of them are snakes.. so watch yourself.. especially in this music business. Keep it up, you improvin' every beat.
-RMP