Nice Song. Nice Vocabulary.
War-Spawn.. you and your brother got madd potential and will make it big. But one thing.. Work on your pronunciation. Like try not to make it sound like your struggling while rapping (I just noticed that about you). Like, you make your tongue slur too much so it will mix with other words and come out sounding weird. Trust me. I can still understand, but you already know how haters are.. They wanna find something bad about you so they can say BS. Your brother is pretty sick too.. he a the "voice of a lyrical rapper" Tell him to keep it up.
Do what most people do, smoke a blunt before rapping. Trust me, it works.
P.S. The chorus is crack!! (Nice creativity)
-RMP
+RESPECT+