TheEyeOfMusiK's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[{DualPistols} Broken Dreams]

THE beat is whats saving you

but im listening pass the beat and listening to your lyrics.

(1ST VERSE DUDE)
Sounds like yo choked a couple times.

Raise your voice up.

Put FX on your voice.

(2ND VERSE DUDE)

You sound boring man.. get hype when you spit.

That wasn't a 16 bar verse.

Raise the volume on your voice.

Sounds like you choked.

[Dat-dow (2:34)]

Hip Hop?

Sounds like a dance song. well.. *uck it, it's catchy as hell. keep doing wut chu doing.

[BN FEAT. Lejin- Solve it]

=\ ..

http://broken-needle.newgrounds.com/n ews/post/9757

BN.. read that.. n give me your answer.. i wanna get to da bottom of dis

Broken-Needle responds:

lol

[Lejin - Fuck G.M.'s]

WTF LMAO!!

warn somebody first!! lol i had kids in da room n they wuz like "suck what??" lmao.
I like your rap style, but this isn't as good as the "Damn Noobs". and hey!! wtf?? wut happened to da full ver to "Damn Noobs" =( i really wanted to hear da full man..

-RMP

Lejin responds:

Its comin its comin ma n***a

[3 Days 3 Crazy Beats! [Beat 1]]

hmm..

This is your best of the 3.

-RMP

[3 Days 3 Crazy Beats! [Beat 3]]

O.o Much better

I like the piano, it sounds abit familiar though. I like how the strings breakdown with the keys too. The voice gotz ta go though.
That lil TOM breakdown sounds hot, but that instrument doesn't fit the song, you should of found a different tom.

-RMP

DJ-DairyKing responds:

aye! yeah, thanks yo.

[3 Days 3 Crazy Beats! [Beat 2]]

Get's distorted at some parts

The beats straight. 3 Days? 3 Crazy Beatz? That's a good idea. But not hard to do.
I don't amagine a gangster fight scene. I instead imagine fat people walking. =O
Keep up the good work.

-RMP

[- Forever - (Full)]

gawd damn your popular

=| your so popular that im jealous. lol
this song is hot.. but after listening to it... It sounds empty.. like it's missing something

[Done With Sadness (Finished)]

Come on!!

the track was hot.. untill u used that stupid mannie fresh melody.

You got skill, just be original.

Lova-Gurl responds:

what mannie fresh melody

[(AC) - Rapstar]

You got a long way to go bruh.

I wouldn't say this sounds like Hip Hop in my opinion.
-The song lacks a melody.
-The ending of it sounds pretty messy.
-Try working on your drumset.
-Go by the musical layout.

Keep practicing and you'll get better.

*I also got 1 question. How did you get "Featured Artist"?

Current Score

1.91 / 5.00 (+ 0.20)

-RMP