TheEyeOfMusiK's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[BN FEAT. Lejin- Solve it]

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http://broken-needle.newgrounds.com/n ews/post/9757

BN.. read that.. n give me your answer.. i wanna get to da bottom of dis

Broken-Needle responds:

lol

[Lejin - Fuck G.M.'s]

WTF LMAO!!

warn somebody first!! lol i had kids in da room n they wuz like "suck what??" lmao.
I like your rap style, but this isn't as good as the "Damn Noobs". and hey!! wtf?? wut happened to da full ver to "Damn Noobs" =( i really wanted to hear da full man..

-RMP

Lejin responds:

Its comin its comin ma n***a

[3 Days 3 Crazy Beats! [Beat 1]]

hmm..

This is your best of the 3.

-RMP

[3 Days 3 Crazy Beats! [Beat 3]]

O.o Much better

I like the piano, it sounds abit familiar though. I like how the strings breakdown with the keys too. The voice gotz ta go though.
That lil TOM breakdown sounds hot, but that instrument doesn't fit the song, you should of found a different tom.

-RMP

DJ-DairyKing responds:

aye! yeah, thanks yo.

[3 Days 3 Crazy Beats! [Beat 2]]

Get's distorted at some parts

The beats straight. 3 Days? 3 Crazy Beatz? That's a good idea. But not hard to do.
I don't amagine a gangster fight scene. I instead imagine fat people walking. =O
Keep up the good work.

-RMP

[- Forever - (Full)]

gawd damn your popular

=| your so popular that im jealous. lol
this song is hot.. but after listening to it... It sounds empty.. like it's missing something

[Done With Sadness (Finished)]

Come on!!

the track was hot.. untill u used that stupid mannie fresh melody.

You got skill, just be original.

Lova-Gurl responds:

what mannie fresh melody

[(AC) - Rapstar]

You got a long way to go bruh.

I wouldn't say this sounds like Hip Hop in my opinion.
-The song lacks a melody.
-The ending of it sounds pretty messy.
-Try working on your drumset.
-Go by the musical layout.

Keep practicing and you'll get better.

*I also got 1 question. How did you get "Featured Artist"?

Current Score

1.91 / 5.00 (+ 0.20)

-RMP

[Runnin' Away]

good track

needs more though.

-RMP

Bleek989 responds:

YEA I COULD ADD MORE BUT THEN IT START SOUNDIN CLUTTERD HOMIE...THATS ONE THING YOU DONT WANNA GET INTO....LOL I SEE YOU STEPPIN UP AND ALL AND IN A WAY YOU KNIDA WHERE I USED TO BE...WHEN I STARTED TO GET GOOD ON HERE....WELL "BETTER" I WAS ALWAYZ LOOKIN UP TO NDP, SAYNT, REVEN, AND 187.....AND THERE OLD SHIT WAS CLUTTERD TO A POINT....SO IF THIS HAD LYRICS IT WOULDNT NEED MORE YA DIGG??

~1~

BY THA WAY I AINT HATIN ON NDP SO DONT TAKE THIS THE WRONG WAY LOL I GOT MAD LUV FOR CJ, (LIL-SAYNT), LUIS (REVEN) AND MARTYN (~187~)

[{2way} Feel It (preview)]

*does da robot*

THIS IS MADD HOT BRUH!!!
keep doing wut chu doing.. im feeling dis ish rit hurr.

----take out da sytrus (w/e its called)

-RMP