Kwing your flow is off or too forced (I'll let you pick).. let the river flow my man, them boulders clogging your stream;). just chill out a bit, you sound like your ranting solving calculations instead of rapping... For someone "like you" study "rap battle parodies" off youtube, if your style was more serious i'd say study ktod, smack, but my point is theres no excuse for dropping wack bars homie... this aint a white or black thing, a nerdy or gangster thing, its none of that.... see those dudes off that parody are nerdy have no delivery but still deliver bars..theres really no excuse. Blest you won, easy victory (and I aint being bias) but make sure you master some parts better like around 2:50 for example, flow aint really a problem to you.. I was surprised when it sounded shaky at the part. Shiiit but knowing you... you probably rushed the verse or sum shit cuz I heard you snap harder than this. Good job doe +1 Blest
Thanks for voting!
Blest - 3
Kwing - 0
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I was about to go to sleep until the intro got my attention.. Your rap is pretty straight, keep grinding.
Work on your stingers tho
Thanks for the feedback.
LOL quit brah (Go back to the drawing board), you got a Danny Phantom voice.. I picture Bill Nye the science guy when I hear you rapping w/ a Wanna-be Funk-Volume flow (but failed horribly)
To other nerds who want to fit into my culture.. you'll get by
To real hip hop heads... You won't last a second in the streets w/ this.. step your delivery/presence up. You just talking, not even rapping.. you ain't even saying much... just trying to flow with words over 2 syllables with zero credibilty.. I see through you mayne. You can't be taking seriously.. No teqneek at all.. more like a trick.. you tricked me into listening to this garbage. LOL
(Now you know wazzup, so all your weak ass rants about how I can't rap can step because right now I'm running circles around you, you still got things to polish up.. I already found myself.... People take my words seriously so you gon be stuck on this for a couple weeks as I move on. (That's how this story usually plays out)
You still on Newgrounds little homie? I thought you got laughed out of here a while ago...
The intro was very dope.. The drop could've been better.
I think it's better if you think of it as background music, it's simple so it isn't distracting or overpowering, just relaxing.
I'ma say this one time and after this it's gonna be hard to get in contact..
I see you talking sh*t on my twitter, only thing is.. I ain't gon give u publicity. Lol So you lost once again. S/O to the homie for copyrighting your name for me, we cut throat n***az out here lmao yall dropping blogs and dissing me publicly but i move in silence behind the scenes, why u think i dont waste my time mentionin yall names or dropping diss tracks on yall?.. i end yall n***az careers w/o yall even knowing it.
https://twitter.com/TheRealLejin lol sillybilly and rakoon over wit too.. start changin ya namez bissssh nikkaz lmao
r.i.p. rmp 2007 - 2007
- Mr. Big Bad Lejin (Hip Hop NG's#1 Artist)
- A-GANG (Almighty Records)
- Real-Over-Fake -(Approved)
Damn I would've thought you'd be on some new shit by now, but you still on that old shit. Oh well!
I don't upload my new/full beats because people steal them. In process of trying to get signed with interscope/uniiversal.
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Interesting assessment. thanks for your input.
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